policy development on the use of social media

This is a final policy development that must be written in memorandum form AND NOT ESSAY. Please include bible verses and Christian viewpoint. I have attached my professor comments from the draft PLEASE read his comments thoroughly and use his suggestions with this assignment. I also attached the draft that I received an 80 due to it being written in the wrong format. The assignment is completed and just need editing,rewriting,formatting. Also the article that helps with this assignment is attached as well.